I am going mountain climbing with Chuppy Chobs, Olly,
Gordon and Jimmy. I smell cold air and my group is miles away from me. I wish
that I could catch up to them. WOW! An avalanche! RUN! Ouch my arm is broken. “Don’t
worry,” said Olly “I will save you. What happened to your arm?” “A rock hit me,
call 111.” A helicopter then came and saved me but Jimmy and Gordon had to meet
me at the hospital.
Awesome work Jake, I love your story :)
ReplyDeleteJake your trip to the mountain sounds quite full on. Your writing is getting amazing!
ReplyDeleteAwesome work Jake. I really liked how you added your friends to the story.
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