Thursday 15 May 2014

On Top of the Mountain


I am going mountain climbing with Chuppy Chobs, Olly, Gordon and Jimmy. I smell cold air and my group is miles away from me. I wish that I could catch up to them. WOW! An avalanche! RUN! Ouch my arm is broken. “Don’t worry,” said Olly “I will save you. What happened to your arm?” “A rock hit me, call 111.” A helicopter then came and saved me but Jimmy and Gordon had to meet me at the hospital. 

3 comments:

  1. Awesome work Jake, I love your story :)

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  2. Jake your trip to the mountain sounds quite full on. Your writing is getting amazing!

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  3. Awesome work Jake. I really liked how you added your friends to the story.

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